이상한 나라의 앨리스(영어편 첨삭)

♧ 선생님 영어도 완벽하지는 않습니다. 이걸 3학년이 다 썼다니, amazing!

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Alice. When she grew up, her sister read a book to Alice, but Alice was bored listening to the story, so she slept underneath a tree.
In the dream, she fell to a Wonderland's entrance. There was a cake and milk. When she ate the cake, she turned big!!
"What's happening to me?!"
When she ate the milk, she turned small. She looked around, and found a small door. She opened it, and fell into the Weirdforest.
There she saw two paths. When she walked to the right, she saw a cat on a tree. The cat said,
"Hi, my name is Crazy Cat. You can call me, 'CC'. If you walk down either the left or right path, there are always crazy friends like me!"
Alice answered,
"Okay CC, I will be careful."
Then she chose the right path and went very quickly because she wanted to see her family again.
Finally, she reached the end of WonderLand, and she lived happily ever after.......

우리가 배웠던 a/the... the는 셀 수 없거나 a 라고 한 것을 지정해서 말할 때 두 번째에 the 가 등장한단다.

한국인의 공통 약점: And So Because로 문장을 시작한다. 그러나 이는 잘 쓰이지 않으며 매우 부자연스럽다.

선생님도 영작하고 무수히 많은 빨간펜 첨삭을 받았기에 선생님이 글 쓴 것처럼 수정해보았다. 다른 점 찾기는 더 어려울 걸?! ^^

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